Bruchko

Bruchko Essay
By Mike Galenda

Q: Bruce does not have an easy life. If this were a book of fiction, what changes would you make to the story?

A: Bruce had a backbreaking life. It was hard to believe that this book was non-fiction; however, if the book was fiction I would have put a few more themes to it. I would intensify the action sceens, put more emotion in the story, and develop a few more characters. I think these would be the elements to produce a good non-fiction novel.

First, I would intensify the action sceens. When Bruce gets shot in the leg three times was pretty action packed already; but make the book more interesting, he could have fallen into a trap that the motilones set up and been stuck there for a day or so, until the motilones found him. Secondly, when Lucio was trying to drown him in the water, a snake could have came by and killed Lucio. Bruce would h...