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Now a days people often work hard on their own business so that they don’t
have time to build good relationship with their friends and family. In my
opinoin(opinion) everyone should just consontact(concentrate ) on their work and businenss. (business)

Thereason are as follows.

The frist (first) reason, building a good relationship with friend would often be an
impediment to your study.

For instance, my friend,( whose name is) peter, used to go out with his
friends , and he just cut classes three day(s) of (a) the week. Once (an )a English
exam was coming on, and his friends called him to go going out to play the (video) viedo game and( poor)??? on the day before the exam. (Therefore) As he had a habit (habet) of going out with his friend firend when asked by his friend. The reason is that he does not dont...