UT acceptance letter/great example

My objective in attending UT is to pursue an education in medicine that will allow me to build a career as a doctor and bring positive change to my community and my profession. I am particularly interested in exploring how medicine and medical technology can provide innovative solutions to problems. I expect that the being a part of the UT environment will provide me with the knowledge, intellectual rigor, and the confidence to apply my abilities to solving complex, real-world problems.
My first goal at UT is to build a solid medical foundation in biology. I have placed great emphasis on academic excellence in my student life. I have consistently been at the top of my class and maintained good grades. My goal is to continue to maintain high standards of achievement while taking advantage of the many intellectual resources available at UT....