legalization of marijuana

Legalization of Marijuana





The Declaration of Independence, the establishment of our nation and the foundation of the United States, was written on hemp paper derived from the Cannabis plant, [that sows the seed of marijuana] this phrase is ambiguous; I suggest you delete it cuz it makes your sentence choppy and confusing. George Washington and Thomas Jefferson, the forefathers of our nation grew hemp. [you need a thesis statement to clarify what you are trying to argue. The thesis statement should be to the point, and arguable. It should be your opinion]
For many years, the United States government has prohibited marijuana from being sold in [the blackmarket of] delete; things on the blackmarket is already prohibited for sale. our nation (you can expand the growing and distribution of marijuana also). Yet, even with the prohibition, marijuana use has only decreased minimally. Because of its illegality, only the bad aspects of marijuana use have been made known to th...