Essay Critique

Essay Critique


In this critique I will be explaining four of the techniques I have used in my argumentative essay. I will also show how two of these techniques have been successful and two that have not been successful.

The first successful technique I used was emotive language, using powerful language which creates a vivid image in the readers’ mind, “… urine-smelling seats or chewing gum on the arm rests…”
This was successful because it creates an image in one’s mind and you conjure up your own experience.
I was trying to make the reader relate to the description, as most have had such an experience on London Transport, as it is still relied on by scores of commuters.
This technique l...